The Testing By: Joelle Charbonneau
Evaluate
When evaluating, look closely to determine what is important and significant.
• Evaluate whether the title fits the story.
• Evaluate the quality of the writing.
• Evaluate whether the main character would be worthy of your friendship.

The quality of the writing is descriptive and interesting. I say that the authors writing is descriptive because the words that they use just put so many images in my head. I'm not really sure what it was but Charbonneau used really juicy and strong words to describe her book. I also say the writing was interesting. It was a very interesting style of writing because Charnonneau didn't necessarily follow the writing rules. He would start off sentences with random words and I have no idea why that's interesting to me but it just is. I would say that I would want to be friends Cia Vale. She is a very smart and friendly person. Cia is just like most of my friends but I think I can relate to her well, so she would be worthy of my friendship.
Hey Sebastian! Nice Blog! I think you should reread the 1st paragraph 4th sentence, if you reread it you will see the mistake. I like the second prompt you used about the author's writing style, cool. Nice Job!
ReplyDeleteI see the mistake thank you Evie!
ReplyDeleteYour paragraphs are well written and give supportive details. Please make sure you fulfill the requirements with three paragraphs. Also, where are your comments?
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